토플라이팅 독립형 independent 모델

통합형 유형

1 MA Making an Argument

2 AD Agreeing or Disagreeing

3 PR Stating a Preference

4 EX Giving Explanation 

1 EX  Why do people attend college or university?

첫문장은 그냥 그대로 써.

People attend college for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a careeer, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and of the world around them.

첫번째 이유는 the primary reason

Career preparation is probably the primary reason that people attend college. 

두번째 이유는 also 

Students also go to college to have new experiences. 

세번째는 

At college, students have the opportunity to increase their knowledge. 

결론 대상을 바꿔줌. College 가 주어. 

Colleges offer much more that career preparation. They offer the opportunity to have new experiences and to learn many kinds of things. I think all of these are reasons why people attend college. 

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2. AD Parents are the best teachers. 

Parents shape their children from the beginning of their children's lives. They develop chlose emotional ties with their children. They share their intersts with them. They teach them valus. Parents can be very important theachers in their children's lives. However, they are not always the best teachers. 

결론.

not the best. There are also teachers at school. We learn from our peers. All of them are valuable. 

3 PR